I am not a poet, and I haven’t written a poem.
Tonight, I felt particularly overwhelmed, I sat down to write my usual scribble, but this ‘poem’ came out. I wrote it in English language, which is not my mother tongue language, so could you tell me your opinion about it, please?
Love me and say you love me
Love me and bare your soul to me
I decline to bury the love
In a grave of taciturnity
Show me, you really love me
I object to being loved
with no passion could I see
Oh my lovely,
Love is drawn on all the leaves of life’s tree
Love is a beautiful poem written on waves of the sea
Love me and say you love me
For my soul I poured into thee
And you will finally know
What love is supposed to be
I am looking forward to receiving your opinion about my first poem.
When you’re writing from the heart – it imparts a strong emotion. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for supporting me 😊
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True.. true feelings always comes out the best
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Very nice 😊
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Thank you so much 😊
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You’re welcome 😊
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Very good writing.
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Thank you so much
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And thank you so much for checking my blog out.
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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I think you did good
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Thank you so much 😊
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How wonderful to be bilingual! Lovely poem!
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Thank you so much for supporting
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The beauty of poetry is that it can say whatever you want! Nice job.
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Thank you so much
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Wow!
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Romantic and charming! Who wouldn’t smile after reading such a sweet poem?
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Thank you so much for supporting me 😊
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Mmmm!!! Please poetic.. and one ☝️ wouldn’t have guessed your English was poor.. or only your second language..
really good.. for a first time..
Thanks for sharing.. I truly enjoyed reading..
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Thank you so much for supporting and encouraging me.😊
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You got it
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Well is second that!! 🙂
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Yes.. he certainly did
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Nice 👍 job indeed
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I’m smiling huge… 😀😀
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Good write.. 👍 soulful
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Welcome…visit my blog 😊
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My pleasure. Of course! I will visit yours.
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Thnx 😇
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I HV a cute story thr..pictorial representation..hope you gonna love it 😊
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I’m gonna check your blog, and read your posts🙂
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Ok
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