My first trying to write a poem in English language

I am not a poet, and I haven’t written a poem.

Tonight, I felt particularly overwhelmed, I sat down to write my usual scribble, but this ‘poem’ came out. I wrote it in English language, which is not my mother tongue language, so could you tell me your opinion about it, please?

Love me and say you love me

Love me and bare your soul to me

I decline to bury the love

In a grave of taciturnity

Show me, you really love me

I object to being loved

with no passion could I see

Oh my lovely,

Love is drawn on all the leaves of life’s tree

Love is a beautiful poem written on waves of the sea

Love me and say you love me 

For my soul I poured into thee

And you will finally know

What love is supposed to be

I am looking forward to receiving your opinion about my first poem.

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